I’m trying clean up the dialogue because I feel like the pacing isn’t right give me your thoughts
Added 2020-06-27 13:53:29 +0000 UTC
Comments
Reads good. I feel like I can actually hear the characters voices. It does feel like a lot of dialogue for one panel tho. Maybe figure out a way to say the same thing more succinctly.
Fredric Altman
2020-06-27 14:43:03 +0000 UTCI feel like it's well paved with nice comical slide ins here and there and it doesn't seem to fast in this panel seems like a regular conversation
Ga1axygr3g
2020-06-27 14:38:30 +0000 UTC
