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SIS Book 3 Chapter 27: Rimmy's Growing Fanbase and Flying Trial [First Draft]

 

Daz had decided to show off a bit. He chose not to return any of his contracted gems to the Astral Crystal Plane as he made his way back to the casino where he'd left his family and friends.

His line of thinking was that he was bringing Rimmy's core along anyway, so what was the harm of showing off a little bit extra on t...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 26: Contracting Gems and Third King [First Draft]

 

"Well, considering the rule of the auction constantly refreshing cooldowns on skills, I should be able to abuse this, right?" Daz asked himself more so than he did the system since he knew he'd get no answer to such a vague question.

He used his new class skill, Astral Crystal Control. Immediately, he felt himself bei...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 15: Rank Ups and Quests Completed [First Draft]

 

"Grats on ranking up," Lone said to Hazel the second he and Soph returned.

It was clear that she had gone up from F-rank to E-rank in the time that he and Soph had delivered the hostages to Mystopolis' southern gate.

The girl was covered in sweat and clearly quite exhausted, but she still turned to face her brother and s...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 14: Captives and Reginald's Glorious Conquest [First Draft]

 

Lone soon contacted Soph and told her that it was safe for her and Breena to bring the kids to the bandits' castle.

The very next second, the two appeared alongside the five teenagers, startling the living shit out of the silently standing bandits.

"Lone!" Soph yelled excitedly as she hugged him and buried her face in hi...

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Little Update On Desmond The Demilich

So, I'm still writing it, but not as regularly.

It is a bit of a struggle to write 2 LTW chapters, 2 SIS chapters, 2 LTW rewrite chapters, 1 bonus chapter for LTW or SIS to add to the $15 tier as well as a DTD chapter per week.

What I've decided is that I'll write DTD when I have the motivation and the time, not just one or the other...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 13: Bandits and Soul Destroying [First Draft]

 

"T-This is a hideout for bandits?" George asked with pure shock in his voice.

In front of him, Hazel's and Lone's groups was a large castle befitting of a grand lord, however, it was isolated in a forest and there was no town nor village in sight.

Soph nodded cutely. "I can feel them. There are three S-rankers, twelve A-...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 25: Upgraded Classes and Friends Fighting [First Draft]

 

"Do you mind if I check out your new classes, Rimmy?" Daz asked as he struggled to hide his joy. If there was anyone that he wanted to get stronger besides himself, it was Rimmy. Madison came in a close second while Hamson occupied third place.

"Rimmy!" Both the core and main body nodded their heads enthusiastically.

Daz...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 24: Crystal and Rimmy Gets Some Upgrades [First Draft]

 

[[New!] Master Crystal Identification [B-Rank (Higher Tier)]

Description

Allows the host to identify any and all crystals and jewels. Due to being master rank, this skill cannot level up, but it also cannot be blocked.

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 12: Archbishop Samson's Decision and Lone's Warning [First Draft]

 

"I can't accept this!" a tall woman dressed in the robes of The Chruch of The Primals screamed as she slammed her dainty fist down onto the round table she and three others were seated at.

One of the other three people - a man in a silky vestment lined with silver and gold - frowned. "Liza, I know how you feel. Trust me, I tru...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 23: Class Change and Existing Skill Upgrades [First Draft]

A/N: Changed how stats are shown slightly in status screens to better differentiate which stats are coming from items and which are not. 


Daz had promised to meet up with Rose, Crusher, Dorian, Madison and Vanessa shortly via text. However, first, he went to a training room in the general amusement centre. He wanted to use ...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 11: Deal and A Noble Girl's Request [First Draft]

 

"Hahahaha! What an idiot! Poor Seeker. To think he hadn't heard about the Ancient incident at the eastern world tree... No, wait, maybe he had heard about it, but didn't believe that an S-ranked Foxkin was pivotal in the battle against Ythmagobla," Sarah speculated as she chugged a pint of dwarven ale.

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 22: Pheldorapod's Considerations and 25-Million [First Draft]

 

"This has been such a waste of time," Han complained.

Daz nodded. "For you, yeah. For me? I want that City Creation Token. I want it a lot."

"I highly suggest you win the bid on this item as well, Daz," Red said. "I'm not sure about your personal chances, but Middletown's chances of surviving the system's tests will...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 21: Ruler Auction and Final Item [First Draft]

A/N: Minor edit. Lord auction changed to ruler auction. 


Daz had stayed with Rose, Madison, Crusher, Dorian and Vanessa until it was time for the next auction, at which point, he said he'd be back in a short while. After all, the auctions - despite lasting for hours - no actual time passed as they were held. View Post

LTW Book 4 Chapter 10: Hazel's Anger and Sarah [First Draft]

 

"That... That was insane- No. It was worse than insane." George was losing his mind.

Scott laughed. "You need to stop getting so worked up over everything Lone does." He put his hands behind his head as he said, "Just get used to it."

Eolande nodded as she floated alongside the boys. "I couldn't agree any more. Husband i...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 9: Rank Up and Dull Double-edged Blade [First Draft]

 

The hall was silent save for the sound of the guards praying to Lone and the occasional noise of rustling paper as he flipped the pages of the book he was reading to kill time.

Finally, as if to break the overly tense atmosphere, the door leading to the staff offices of the Merchant's Guild creaked open.

Heads turne...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 8: Cathartic Cuteness and Attempted Arrest [First Draft]

 

"Ha-ah..." After sighing grandly, Millisa came back to her senses. "Okay. Let's ignore these claims of yours for now. I find them very hard to believe."

Lone shrugged as he coiled a hand around Soph's warm belly and rubbed it softly. "Sure." Soph fidgeted a little bit and tightened her grip on his tails. 'Her cuteness...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 20: War and Total Evolvers [First Draft]

 

"Death Energy Solidification," Daz and his two clones said together.

Immediately, four extra bulging arms grew on their bodies; one above and one beneath each of their normal arms.

The three of them then all walked backwards until they were about thirty-feet away from the measuring device. Daz paid the one-thousand ...

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Announcement!

The $15 tier has now been created. Yay. I got around to it.

First and foremost, any chapters that get added to that tier WILL NOT affect the normal 2-chaps-per-week schedule for either story.

A secondary note: I wouldn't suggest upgrading to or subbing to that tier until it is completed unless you just want to suppor...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 19: A Request For Crusher and Hsiao-Han [First Draft]

 

Daz was by himself now. He had told Rose, Madison and Vanessa that he planned to find the winning slot machines in the lord and champion equivalents of this casino before checked a few other ones.

The three of them were fine with that. Madison wanted to come with him, but she wasn't a champion nor was she a lord. Daz agreed to...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 18: Winning Streak and Strange Family [First Draft]

 

"Oh my." Ran Hamilio opened her eyes widely. "It sounds like you were expecting me."

Rose gave the young-looking Korean woman a long, hard stare before she sighed. "You suck at acting. You know damned well about my esper ability. It's obvious that I was aware you were here. Don't play stupid with me."

Ran chuckled softly...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 7: Millisa and A Second Soul Oracle [First Draft]

 

"What? He's a soul oracle?"

"Did he say that thing can hold souls? It feels so ordinary."

"Eh? It's covered in a basic illusion designed to make it look normal."

"Really? But can it actually store souls? It'd have to be a Mythical-ranked item to do that. Not just anyone can get an item like that."

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 6: New Mechanical Limbs and Angry Redhead [First Draft]

 

[[Unnamed] Brass Mind-Linked Fairy-Forged Arm MK II

Description

Created by Lone Immortus with unidentifiable magic.

This arm is designed to act as a permanent replacement for a lost arm and it is equivalent in power to an average A-ranker's a...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 17: Slot Machine Shakedown and Split-consciousness [First Draft]

 

"Are you sure this is the best place?" Daz asked.

He and Rose were now in a brightly-lit casino that was filled with an assortment of gamblings devices and games like slot machines and card-game tables.

The two of them were in one of the many restaurants that were inside of this massive casino. They had chosen a Korean-b...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 16: Nearing Level Three and Merit Ranking [First Draft]

A/N: Sorry LTW readers. I autopilot labelled this as an LTW chapter at first. I edited it lickity-split like, but email notifs ratted me out. I beg forgiveness, please. 


'Justice Chains!' Daz yelled in his mind.

The next thing he saw, was Larry's yoyo spinning towards his face incredibly quickly. Daz bar...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 5: Talks of Love and Talks of Souls [First Draft]

 

Lone, Soph and Eolande split from George and Scott once they had reached the diamond floor where the diamond-grade suites were.

Even though there were only twenty such suites in total, and despite the fact that all of their suites were right next to each other, Lone still gifted the two boy's with a modified communication...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 4: Palace of Rest and Choking Equality [First Draft]

 

George led Lone, Soph, Eolande and Scott to what looked like a grand castle of some sort. If it wasn't for the large metal and fluorescently-enchanted sign saying 'Madam Cortelle's Palace of Rest', then Lone wouldn't have believed that it was supposedly a hotel.

It had taken them thirty minutes of walking to reach this pl...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 15: Class Upgrade Token and Larry Billard [First Draft]


"My wonderfully patient Earth testees, it is now time for the thousandth and final item of the general auction!" Pheldorapod exclaimed.

Daz was paying extra attention to this item since Rose had said that he'd like it. He wasn't entirely sure if she was being sarcastic or serious, but regardless, he op...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 14: Skill Cap and Successful Cracking [First Draft]


Pheldorapod coughed lightly and spoke to Daz in his usual voice. "Due to the items size, Dear Customer, you shall be granted a temporary skill to allow you to move it with comfort. I assume this is okay with you?"

Daz nodded.

"Lovely! In that case, I look forward to seeing you use your other tickets, Dear Customer," the Oc...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 3: Plan For Slavers and Entering Mystopolis [First Draft]

 

Ever since his group had left the border gate and were waiting while sitting on a patch of nearby boulders, Lone had felt several eyes on him, Breena, Rachel, and especially Kyuubi.

'Some of them can tell our strength, but some can't.' He couldn't help but sigh deeply. He turned to Swind and asked him, "Your new ...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 13: Red Lightning and Davido's Joy [First Draft]

 

'Why?!' Aila never understood Daz's words. No, even more than that, she couldn't understand his words. 'I'm happy being your second... I've accepted being behind that woman. Even I understand that I can't replace her. I'm okay with it, even. It's not like I don't have lovers too, but why, wh...

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